something is missing....I don't know why?

I wrote this poem when I was in 10th std.

In the midst of July,
when there is brightness in the sky
the trees are swinging, the flowers are laughing...
and leaves are talking to every passerby.....


something is missing....I don't know why?


The vehicles are moving, faces are grooming
when hawkers are singing, pakodas are ready to fry....


something is missing....I don't know why?